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Poetry about Daddy!

Posted: |April 18th, 2019|, 7:50 pm
by MoonSugarStardust
Daddy, tell me a story.
A story about a girl.
I girl who looks like me,
and understands my world.

Daddy, make her pretty!
give her ribbons in her hair,
her hair that shines like gold,
and is fluffy beyond compare.

Daddy, make her clever!
and helpful to you too,
let her make you cookies,
and chocolate milk for two!

Daddy, make her happy!
give her a stuffie and a dream,
give her a pretty purple paci,
and if she’s real good, ice cream!

Daddy, make her smile!
give her tickles and kisses for days!
and take her to the park,
to watch clouds and catch some rays.

Daddy, do you love her?
does she make your heart feel joy?
do your eyes light up when she needs you?
are you happy when she plays coy?

Daddy, I want to be a good girl!
a good girl! like the one in the book!
“but sweetheart, you already are!
as you checkmate with your Rook.

Re: Poetry about Daddy!

Posted: |April 20th, 2019|, 9:26 am
by CosmianAndNovella
That was pretty good! But can you explain the last bit about chess a bit? We could not catch if it is a metaphor or not!

Re: Poetry about Daddy!

Posted: |April 20th, 2019|, 2:07 pm
by MoonSugarStardust
yes! my sorta-daddy and I play chess! I always lose! <3

Re: Poetry about Daddy!

Posted: |April 20th, 2019|, 3:45 pm
by LittleBJY
Who is in checkmate in the poetry I want to make sure I understand it 100%

Re: Poetry about Daddy!

Posted: |April 20th, 2019|, 3:54 pm
by LittleBJY
Oh never mind I get in now. It says Rook I read rock my bad I need to focus on what I read my bad.